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Thursday, March 26, 2015

SOLC #26 April Awaking

The Slice of Life March Challenge is hosted by Two Writing Teachers.

I needed a quick slice today.  This has been playing around in my mind, so here is a spring haiku.

 dormant December
beneath winter's blanket lies
April awaking

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10 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 26, 2015 at 12:00 PM

    I have been experiencing a lot of snow and we have seen drastic changes and this summed it up.

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  2. writekimwriteMarch 26, 2015 at 12:01 PM

    Yes! I like the thought of this and the contrasting words dormant/awaking!

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  3. travelinmaMarch 26, 2015 at 12:06 PM

    The matching of image and the simplicity of words is just perfect. Thank you.

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  4. elsieMarch 26, 2015 at 1:24 PM

    Love to notice the plants slowly awakening.

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  5. RaeilyMarch 26, 2015 at 3:23 PM

    Love the simple, beautiful haiku. Nice slice.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 26, 2015 at 4:54 PM

    Just a light touch of alliteration that really works. And the balance of lower case, upper case; upper case, lower case in the first and last lines. And a hopeful message. Perfect.

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  7. UnknownMarch 26, 2015 at 5:25 PM

    Winter's winter blanket can take a hike now! Love seeing those little green pieces of life emerging.

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  8. ssurridgeMarch 26, 2015 at 8:38 PM

    I love haikus because they use those few perfectly chosen words to tell such a rich story. The image is a perfect match.

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  9. TaraMarch 26, 2015 at 9:24 PM

    Yes! Let April awaken.

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  10. LoraleeMarch 27, 2015 at 5:27 AM

    What a wonderful haiku!

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