Patty grew up in a poor family who didn't believe in good luck. She lived in Leprechaun Village, a town with luscious fields of green clover, and rumor was that pots of gold could be found at the end of a rainbow if you were lucky enough to find one.
One day her bother came running in and announced that someone found a pot of gold. Patty pondered at the announcement, something she desperately wanted but could never find. Why couldn't she be lucky?
She grabbed her coat, vanished out the door, and looked up into the sky. Suddenly without warning, the skies opened up and rain poured down upon her, completely soaking her coat and clothes. She waited and waited for a rainbow to peek out from the sun, when a tiny leprechaun climbed up to her ear and whispered, "You won't find a pot of gold here; your treasure is where your heart is." She dejectedly turned around to go home muttering something about never being lucky when just above her house was the rainbow she was searching for and her treasure waiting inside: her family.
This was a fun activity, and I think I may try some of Brain's challenges with my students during our testing time.
a space for me and other teacher-writers to share our stories.
Wow, that was so clever. I definitely couldn't do that with so many rules for just ten sentences! Such a great moral too.
ReplyDeleteI have been using his writing challenges for my Wednesday posts. They are fun to do. Great story. Family definitely is a pot of gold. arjeha
ReplyDeleteThis is a great writing idea (I'll check out the others, too) and since I love St. Patrick's Day I think I'll try this one too. Your story is wonderful with a perfect ending/lesson. Thanks for sharing the idea and the result!
ReplyDeleteThis was a delight to read. You incorporated the sentence parameters so seamlessly!
ReplyDeleteFun, Leigh Anne. This kind of writing is a fun and useful challenge. Thanks for the link.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing! I will have to use this structure with my kids. As you said, a great activity during testing time when the kids need something fun in the mix.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun challenge! You nailed it!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing the link and your story is wonderful! Great idea to use these during testing time!
ReplyDeleteI love this ending! What a fun way to keep the learning in the spirit of the day.
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